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(Any constructive criticism would be helpful!) A Twist in the story Rapunzel Based on the Grimm Brother Tale Rapunzel.       "Whoosh", the wind sings gently, as it removes my red scarf from my chilled neck. I reached for it but it was too late-the monsters clutched it with pleasure and snickered at the fact they were gaining on me. I look back panting, I struggle to keep going. I knew I could never escape them attempting to abduct my precious hair. As my sun-kissed hair flows through the air, I stumble upon a root of a tree. I fall. He swooshes down and saves me, his big brown eyes gracing me with their bewitching spell. I fall in love fo